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The Descent of Man: A Novel by Kevin Desinger (Unbridled Books; $24.95; 272 pages)
The Descent of Man explores an interesting premise: In the face of fear, can humans actually de-evolve into their basest nature creating a world where self-preservation overtakes reason and higher-order thinking?
The book opens when the main character, Jim, and his wife, Marla, hear two car thieves attempting to steal their car in the wee hours of the morning. Jim’ s subsequent decision on how to act, and then an impulsive, unplanned act, come together instantly to set off a chain of events that involve a lie, which, of course, leads to subsequent lies and more complications before the story finally resolves itself.
The tale starts off well. While the theft of a car may lead one to initially assume that the book will be an action/suspense story, a great deal of the early portion of the book is told from a psychological, philosophical point of view through the inner workings of the minds of the main characters. This is where the book works best.
As the story unfolds, a promising concept begins to unravel. It is possible the author tried to do too much at once. For a while, the reader may want this to be a thriller, with humans hunting down other humans, car chases, accidents, and scenes that take place in the seediest part of town. Or, they may like the parts that stick to the introduction and are a psychological drama about tormented and tortured souls. Or, they may like the scenes that touch on the relationship between Jim and Marla and want more of the “love story”, for lack of a better term. But the reader gets a little bit of each and not enough of any of them to be truly satisfied.
It is hard to know what to make of the detective in the story. Does he want to help Jim, or is he setting Jim up? Clearly, he does not trust Jim, yet at the end, they seem to form an interesting, through unrealistic bond. One painful incident from the couple’s past is introduced, but does not do much to advance the story or give hints as to the current nature of their relationship. Perhaps, in fact, the most unsatisfying parts of the story are those that focus on Jim and Marla. Jim is supposedly desperately in love with her, and she wants badly to reconcile after events cause them to be apart for a while. But most of this picks up about halfway through, when the reader believes the story is headed in a different direction. There just isn’t enough to them to care very much about their relationship. The crimes, lies and curiosity about who might get caught, killed, or whatever, is much more intriguing.
There are some other problems from a plausibility standpoint, like when Jim buys a gun from a hooker he hardly knows during one of his insomniac-based ventures into the town’s red light district.
In this reviewer’s opinion, author Kevin Desinger has promise, but the book falls a bit short despite some strong passages that peak the reader’s interest.
A review copy was received from the publisher. The Descent of Man will be released on May 3, 2011.
Fragile: A Novel by Lisa Unger (Shaye Areheart Books, August 2010)
“The sins of a family always fall on the daughter.” P.F. Sloan
“She already knew the hard edges of the world, knew that life disappointed and that most people’s dreams never did come true.” Lisa Unger
This one is a stunner. In Fragile, author Lisa Unger tells the story of four fragile lives that are joined together by events separated by twenty years. Unger’s genius is in plotting the story so that the reader never knows what’s coming next.
The story starts with a look-in at what appears to be a crime being committed, although the facts are not clear. What is clear is that a young woman, Charlene, has gone missing. She intended to run away from her sleepy community, The Hollows, in New York State in order to make music in Manhattan. But she’s suddenly fallen off the face of the earth.
The residents of The Hollows, including the young woman’s mother and her boyfriend Ricky’s parents, are forced to revisit their memories of a high school girl named Sarah who disappeared two decades earlier. She was found dead, mutilated; a crime to which a male classmate confessed. But the young man who said he killed her was troubled and perhaps mentally unstable. He went on to spend years in state prison, before he died by his own hand.
With this background we fear that Charlene has been abducted or murdered by the evil force or forces that killed Sarah. Charlene’s mother was a classmate of Sarah’s, as was Ricky’s mother, Maggie, and his police detective father. These adults are all keeping secrets about their lives both now and at the time that Sarah was killed.
Others in the community also know things about the events surrounding the past crime, but they’re not talking. The residents of The Hollows become frozen with the fear that they are reliving a nightmare and decide to hide rather than speak. With little information to go on, the local police force begins to suspect Ricky’s involvement in Charlene’s disappearance. Charlene did, after all, stand him up on the night she left home and had informed her friends about another boyfriend in New York City.
As the tale proceeds, we see that there are no perfect families in The Hollows. The parents criticize their children for doing the very things they did when they were young, and this simply piques the desire of the young to escape as soon as they can. The current mystery, the apparent crime that surrounds the disappearance of Charlene, will only be solved by confessions. Because there may very well be links between what may have happened to Charlene and what happened “twenty years time ago” to Sarah.
“As she told them all about her buried memory, she felt an awe at how all their separate lives were twisted and tangled, growing over and around one another… And how the connections between them were as terribly fragile as they were indelible.”
There will be no hints here – no spoiler alerts needed – as to the fates of Charlene and Ricky, except to note that Unger convinces us that everything in life is so well-connected (if hardly explainable). The past is, indeed, prelude. This is a read that will stay with you.
Unique, stunning. Highly recommended.
This review was written by Joseph Arellano. A review copy was provided by the publisher. Fragile was released on August 3, 2010.